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amayasuki
16 July 2008 @ 06:45 pm
{ facepalms }  
I finished!! I'm sorry it's small... *facepalms*

Teaser:




Original:..................................... Coloured:...................................


Series: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles well duh? xD; *stares at LJ layout*
Characters: C!Sakura's soul + body. Just at... different periods of the manga. And different worlds.
Panel: Volume 21 - Chapter 160 - cover
Credits: CLAMP for manga panel. [info]ladydarkmoon for scan!
Comments: Yes, the body is supposed to be see through enough to see the soul (+ soul's dress) behind her. ^^; *fail* And now the shading of the hair barely shows compared to the preview post. D=



>< Though I'd like more comments/critique, I'm not going to upload to any comms (e.g. [info]manga_colors)... *is ashamed of it's size*

Which I should probably explain. At first I was just going to icon it like the Syao-Mokona failure (points at dp's bad colour choices), but the small details in the hair annoyed me. x_x So I decided to -start- with a larger size, and then shrink down once I'm done the hair... and well... I forgot. ><; So this is how it turned out! Small. But I'm satisfied enough to post it on LJ.


Yay for doing this for the heck of it! I'm hoping I've improved from VK, and SDC before that...

Comments/criticism from those who DO see this would be loved &hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts


EDIT:
As requested... icons of it =)


Please credit if using, thanks!
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❙thε dεspεrαtε κingdom of lovε❙[info]chocoshins on July 16th, 2008 10:51 pm (UTC)
First of all an AWESOME job to clean the scan, kudos for that.
And although small and you can't see much details, i like the soft coloring, it has a nice touch on it. &hearts
e | trace the moment; fall forever: trc; syao[info]amayasuki on July 17th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you &hearts! It took some tweaking...
Sarah: IchiRuki [Broken][info]nebulasan on July 16th, 2008 10:57 pm (UTC)
From the first one, I have to say that the coloring has gotten a lot better and I love the background color.
e | trace the moment; fall forever: code geass; vendetta[info]amayasuki on July 17th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad it's improved.
Celes[info]tokyo_girl14 on July 16th, 2008 11:56 pm (UTC)
Good job on the coloring! I liked how you colored the feathers and tried to make them fluffy.
e | trace the moment; fall forever[info]amayasuki on July 17th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
Thanks. XD; The feathers were actually really annoying to work with *points at the one on her arm* It refuses to look like a feather imo
silverzero16[info]silverzero16 on July 17th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
Looks good! Love the background. (I sorta used that colour scheme for my "space" design in comm tech back in grade 10 lol). Something about those colours make it awesome lol. Don't ya think?

LOL stop pointing out the flaws.. people might not notice it ya know!
e | trace the moment; fall forever: other; keira k[info]amayasuki on July 17th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you~
And pointing out flaws helps me improve!!
Kitsu-nee, Queen of the Superficial ♥: Fye wanna dance[info]kitsune_no_ame on July 17th, 2008 08:39 am (UTC)
Wow it's GORGEOUS!! I love what you did to the hair! You should x-post it to some TRC comms, it's really awesome!
e | trace the moment; fall forever: trc; syao[info]amayasuki on July 17th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
Aw thanks~ Yea I decided against it because it's such a small size. >< Or at least I feel like it's very small
Michiyo Hikari[info]michiyohikari on July 17th, 2008 03:26 pm (UTC)
You've definitely improved ^^ If I didn't know you coloured it, I would've thought it was a real coloured scan :)
e | trace the moment; fall forever: trc; c188[info]amayasuki on July 17th, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you think so~
LOL XD I think that'd be going too far, love. x.x
i'll never love you.: [femme!envy] I'll stitch my eyes wide[info]bodyline on July 25th, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
Absolutely beautiful! Nice job. 8)
e | trace the moment; fall forever: cg; gogogo[info]amayasuki on July 25th, 2008 08:20 pm (UTC)
=) thank you
cassandra ☆彡: tsubasa ☆ sakuras[info]chiixhideki on July 25th, 2008 08:14 pm (UTC)
So gorgeous. *______* Great job! ♥
e | trace the moment; fall forever: trc; syao[info]amayasuki on July 25th, 2008 08:21 pm (UTC)
^^ Thanks so much
Mellu: 「trc」sakura - paper flowers[info]elystia on July 25th, 2008 08:56 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is gorgeous! Did you ever end up iconing it? Because I would love to use an icon of this, it's stunning!
e | trace the moment; fall forever: cg; gogogo[info]amayasuki on July 26th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC)
I made a few versions. =) They've been added to this post *points up* Thank you so much for your kind comment. ^^
Lucy[info]redeternity90 on July 26th, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)
Whoa. o_______o Even though it's small, it's amazing. :O You definitely have talent! ♥♥♥
e | trace the moment; fall forever: cg; gogogo[info]amayasuki on July 26th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC)
Aw haha XD thanks for your kind compliment
i_heart_milton[info]i_heart_milton on July 26th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC)
Wow!
You've done a wonderful job! how'd you get so good?
e | trace the moment; fall forever: other; keira k[info]amayasuki on July 26th, 2008 09:20 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow!
x___x I'm really not that good... I don't get much time to practice. ^^; I'm glad you like it though
ariadnechan[info]ariadnechan on July 28th, 2008 11:31 pm (UTC)
i love it!!
e | trace the moment; fall forever: cg; euphie[info]amayasuki on July 29th, 2008 12:18 am (UTC)
thanks, i'm glad you like it!
Loyal: Tsubasa: Fai: Once upon a dream[info]loyaldreamer on August 11th, 2008 06:28 am (UTC)
So beautiful! I saved a few of the icons, will credit if I use them.
e | trace the moment; fall forever: trc; sakura[info]amayasuki on August 11th, 2008 12:04 pm (UTC)
Thanks for letting me know =) enjoy!